Tallstar's Revenge

First off, this picture is very eye catching. I saw it while scrolling through my watch list and just had to click on it.
There is a lot to look at here, from the overall colour scheme to the small detail such as that paw sticking up from the corner ( peace in rest sandgorse).
The fact that theres a lot of cats in one picture also helps making the whole thing more appealing, great job there!

Now for the parts that, in my humble opinion, could use some work.
To put it bluntly; a lot of the cats look akward.
The gray/purple cat that i assume is Heatherstar's eyes look wierd, I think the smallest one is a tad too small.
Some of the other cats have mouths that are way too close to their nose, making them look kitlike.
The large brown (shrewclaw?) cat's ear also bothers me for some reason. The necks here also seem a bit crooked and willowy. The ginger-and-white cat's nose also looks strange.

There are also a lot of the atonomy here that I really like, such as Talltails back legs, his ears and those eyebrows, like dayum. The snake-like way you drew his tail is quite pleasing to look at, love it!

Great work on the background too, you have an awsome way of drawing grass. The whole piece looks glowy, but it dosen't appear that you abused the illumosity setting, so I'll give you some extra credit for that!

Sorry if this was too long or a bit harsh. I really liked this drawing and I'm definetly going to scroll through your gallery now!